rate_review Reviews

I enjoy this story, though it is a little bit of a struggle to read with so many stories going on and I have to admit that I skim much of it when characters such as Inari, Tayuya, Ranmaru and so on are in the main focus. I also don't like having to go back and forth between the Tales of Tarrasade and this one to fully understand what his going on in the backstories. It's frustrating because I don't know how far to read into one before having to switch to the other. I'm anxious for more of the Kisame/Itachi. Their relationship is probably the most interesting to me out of all the others. I'll check back in with this in a few weeks when a couple more chapters are completed. Very interesting :)

Oh this chapter was hilarious!! We all know Haku is a master manipulator but to see it up close was great...and I also loved the scene between Chamu and Itachi, he's shaping up very well(Itachi that is)...I think what I liked most about this chapter was it really highlights how your able to bring new characters into the storyline and illuminate their personalities and their interactions with others enough for us to form opinions of them in just one chapter...affection, dislike, worry, humor..there's always something that stays with me about them so when the visit in other chapters they meld with almost seamless familiarity (word of the day calendar..lol)...I will try not to kick and scream about the one chapter a week now...your a writer, you have a muse...your fans can't tie you to the computer..dammit..lol. Five's character was great by the way, such a strong little guy :)

the problem of feral is solved, naru and saku will be able to be together more often. Haku will be free. I love this story. Once a week for publication it 's still very good, inspiration is the more important

I have say, I'm sorry. I love love love love this story & I don't do enough reviewing. :(

But onto the review. I really love how you are tying everything together. Wow how do you keep all these straight in your head? I wonder if you see a movie in your head. I totally agree on using Inochi as the sacrifice as he was portrayed as the selfish one & his unselfish sacrifice did have the most impact.

As for the kids, can't wait to see how the feral kids will turn out. :D

awww i hope things go back to normal for them soon

I loved it! You cover so much in this chapter. The feral children and the elections. Naruto running and checking on all the other groups. I'm in awe of all the detail work you put into this story it's just amazing:) Do you ever feel like you have a computer room full of Spacer?:) Yes you have spoiled us rotten with two (2) chapter a week:) So my Space Queen of the Naruto Universe it's time for us to suck it up and have one (1) chapter a week huh:) OK but any time you get ahead we will welcome that extra chapter during the week or weekend OK! Hey I have to tell you. The few moments the boys spent together before Naruto had to run off was priceless. Their love is ever growing ^_^

I love Five he is sooso awesome! and smart hope he never gives in to Chamu...next.. Chamu needs to get slapped..seriously hybrid or not him harassing Five is unnecessary.. I say he's jealous..thank you Itachi for kicking his ass and Naruto for growling!

hmm is this the last we'll see of Kurotsuchi? Hhmmm I wonder..feels like she might cause problems in the future..

I don't like Han or his Kaiju people.. did i spell that right?...hmm I feel like they're gonna have to be put in their place eventually

I must say you make my college life worth while. Thank you for another update, and don't even worry about your updates going to once a week cause you are better than most authors. Some ppl do 2 weeks at a time or months, I'm just happy your muses are still working and your updating on the regular. And even if you weren't I'd be on here every day checking for one. lol I'm glad/sad a solution was found and the part w/ Itachi and Chamu was good.

Anyho keep up the good work and can't wait till next time.

Very happy that Sickler's Ebisu is safe, wondering how the two of them will weave into the story line, along with other characters or if their time is short?..so many questions that I'm sure you'll answer in time...would love to see how Haku, Kisame , and especially Itachi is handling all the feral children, I can just imagine how full their hands are..lol :) Wonderful writing ..if I ever forget to mention that..the flow of the words, emotions and situations between the characters, you can almost see them in front of your eyes while you read...I especially like how there will be a small snippet in the storyline that grabs the attention and then even after the chapter is over we still wonder, hope or worry..its very stressful(lol) I'm very much a dedicated fan. :)

Get used to it Ebisu san... damn, I'm glad thay got him out. I don't know if they'll be so lucky with others though. That woman is sick!