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It begins with a small group of (mostly) lonely and damaged individuals and ends with a large, functional, damaged (but healing) family. As it should be. You know there will be hurts in the future. Like when Shika finds out about Klenn, when the kits pass long before the rest of the children, when Ran finds someone and Konohamaru has to stand by and watch, and when everyone loses Naruto. But there will also be triumphs like when they finally snag Orochimaru, when Konan starts really living again, or when any of the children finds permanant partners (I am amused by the idea of Haru and Sumiko.

Looking foward to anything you decide to post.

[ch 119] Thank the Lady there will be more Mannah stories to come! And what a perfectly lovely ending to the second book in the trilogy!!! Thank you very much for all your hard work, Mannah-san!

I'm choked up right now:) It was such a warm wonder ending to series two. I'm very happy there will be another installment...Yea Baby! I knew but it didn't register that it has been a year wOw! You are an amazing person to me! I mean this from the bottom of my heart Thank you for all your hard work. It has been such a pleasure to enjoy your story weekly. It has been the ultimate get away for me:) I'm going to get on the list ^_^

I hope you've got a couple of mainstream fics out there for me to purchase. I would love to add your work to my collection!

This was a wonderful story that truly took me to a new and different place. I have enjoyed each and every moment, even the sad ones. I look forward to your future efforts! You are beyond prolific.

I can't believe its over..for now :) Well, for over a year you've made me smile, laugh,
cry, yell in disbelief, and shout in anger..its been wonderful. I can hardly wait for your
next posting whatever it will be. Thank you very much for sharing your universe
with all of us, its the best gift ever! Sincerely your devoted fan, v

I do not know what to say so I will simply say 'Thank You'. I look forward to more of your writings!

hoho it's finished !! but i happy to know you want xrite a sequel thi story is awesome ans i want to know more about new uchiha and what will happen to naru and sasu !! you did a wonderful job !! this story is so great I like to read it again somtetime even if I know the story !! THANK YOU I had a great time
See you soon with the new story, you really decerve a break !!!

Thank you for another wonderful story. As always you have left me amazed and content.

I don't know what to say. I am so conflicted! I don't know whether to cry or laugh and smile. The whole chapter was so bittersweet that it had me crying. I still feel very sensitive. Everything was beautiful. Ran finally healing, Itachi with Haku, Asuma and his children, and especially, Naruto, Sasuke, and their litter. It was amazing. The closing scene perfect.

Thank you for sharing this amazing saga with us and I really look forward to getting an email from you telling me you have posted something new or just to continue existing works.

Sincerely


Moonmoore

So it happened.... This is the end of Iteration. But as long you say that there is going to be a third part I have something to look forward to....

Gods... I don't know what to say (write...)

This story is amazing. It was there for s long! I wasn't there from the start but once I started to read it I just couldn't stop. I ignored 'In the cold of space...' many times because the summary somehow didn't get my attention. But then one day I just give it a chance and since then.....

Later I showed it to my friend and she started to read it at work and getting into some minor trouble because of that! This story just pulls people in.

You created something really amazing and I'm not sure if you know it. You probably think that it's just another fanfic but it's more than that. Just look at the number of reviews and ratings. I think it's number one on AFF! The plot is build with such a care. Everything makes sense... It's perfect!

I cried when Ran thew himself into Kakashi's arms. I gasped when Sasuke reminded Iruka that the NEW Uchiha is not just him, but all of them, the family. I can't put into words how amazed I am by this story. How hey all matured and evolved... (It's kind of discouraging because it shows me how pitiful is my writing but it is also my... how should I put it... "Perfection is our goal, excellence will be tolerated." I hope to be tolerated one day AND enjoy the perfection for as long as YOU let us. )

I wanted to thank you specifically for ending with 'growling possessive Naruto' instead of the fluffy! I'm not sure why but I needed that. It was a perfect closure (TEMPORARY closure! NOT FINAL!) because that was how it had all started. And you actually even mentioned their first time. It was just too much! I remember reading this for the first time and I kind of wish I never read it before so I could start now and read it 'for the first time'... again.... (I still hope that maybe, some day, you could fill the spots about the beginnings of NarutoxSasuke's relationship as the 'Stories from the Silver Leaf'...)

But let's look into future now. The past is gone and the future is what's left.
The NEW Uchiha's future is up to you! Take responsibility! Give them a future! You created them! You're their mother! Sorry... I got carried away.

Once again - THANK YOU!
Thank you for writing and sharing. Thank you for doing it on such a level.
You'll never know how great it was for us - readers. Please, keep writing.
THANK YOU!

- YamanashiOchinashiIminashi (melissen)