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A very sweet story about the children. They are developing (or, rather, you are giving them) interesting personalities and abilities. Of course, Haru has been interesting from the start. If the adults ever succeed in limiting Haru to the information they want him to have, Haru would probably develop real behavior problems due to frustration and boredom.

I am back from Holidays! 8D

....And the three new chapters were AMAZING.

I am so happy with this chapter, we got to see how Ran is developing into a wonderful friend...also learning more about Kazuki and who he is becoming is such a plus, I love any chapter that includes the children :) To have Yo-chan and Ya-chan follow was a welcome surpise also :) I love how close all of the children are. I really hope this changes how In-chan and En-chan are treated...they could be such a help to the family and to Shika especially...and I find them and their personalities adorable....*whisper* they need a boyfriend..just saying..lol, I really cannot wait until the next chapter to find out how Sasuke handles what happened between him and Haru and how he allowed his heartache over Naruto to ultimately hurt his very emotionally sensitive child, and yeah for Kiba and how he has become confident enough to stand up to Kakashi. Also on a side note.....I absolutely refuse to think of a time when you feel the universe you have created and moved me too is drawing to a close...sequels are wonderful...sequels that go on forever are perfect!!!LOL

oh they found haru, he was in ensan and in sna house- they are haru's friends, hopefuly it will help them to be part of the crew. this story is awesome, i love it

OMG I feel so bad for everyone! Naruto, Shikamaru, Haku...please get better!

Poor Haru, there's just no one who understands him. I have a sneaky suspicion where he'll turn up, but I ain't sayin' nothin'. I also have to wonder what's going on with Orochimaru. We all know he's going to get his but I'd like to see what's going on in his sick head.

It is never pleasant finding out how very wrong you have been so long after the fact... especially if you are finding out because of all the damage that has been caused by those mistakes. Sasuke is going to feel guilty forever over this - even if he knows that he always had the best of intentions.

I was almost crying at the end of this chapter. I am glad Iruka was there to help Sasuke. Sasuke is finally learning a bit about how Haru thinks. I wish him luck telling his children about Naruto. I love this fic it is so well thought out. Keep up the awesome work. <3 HUGS!!!!!

This chapter is great just like all the rest of them. I love the multi-level line, it always keeps you guessing what's going to happen next, but most importamtly it keeps a reader very interested in the story! I Love the chapter! I hope Haru doesn't stay hidding for to long. Please keep up the awesome work. :D

This is killing me. I cried... The real life sucks enough and now even the fanfic world is sad... V_V,