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person v
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that Sasuke has figured out what is happening to his family and that he and Haru spent time together talking. I loved his conversation with Ka-chan, Ya-chan, and Yo-chan..that was perfect :) As the children get older and we see more of them I think it makes the storyline that much more fuller and involved, wondering what they'll do next is so much fun:) Haku is awake!!!!! He is going to have his hands full getting the household in order and dealing with the many upsetting things that are going on..but I think we all know he is more than up to the task...especially Sumiko, (bleh). I have to acknowledge that I'm very worried about Naruto's recovery, its like this horrible cliffhanger that seeps its way into every chapter and even though we smile, laugh , and cry at the antics of our beloved crew...its just there...sucking all the joy and flooding us with worry, stress, and heartache...and obviously I'm gonna have to remind myself one again not to be crazy fan girl! :)LOL
person ahmenet
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your story telling still amazes me. I have never been more enthralled with anything I've read. I look forward to every update and share what you have written with a good friend who loves to listen to me tell it. It reminds me of story tellers before words were written by more than scholars and bards traveled from village to village singing the stories to the next set of avid listeners. It's amazing how much I've grown to love the characters you've created. Keep it up, please! You will always have a fan in me.
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I could kiss Haku! I've missed him and I'm so happy that he is back. The family is still slowly but surely recovering. I'm proud of Sasuke and I hope things are only looking up for awhile.
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes! nutty little punished! Haru is growing up! They all grow up so fast! It amazes me because I don't even see when it happens.... I wonder how old are Sasuke and Naruto now... I must check it I guess... Now that another pillar is awake the Uchiha household should do better but until the pedestal awakes it will never be the same....
person Aflyingmonkey123
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Haku's back. Amazing moment between Sasuke and Haru. :3
Loved how Haku swept in and put Sumiko in her place like it was nothing. Oh how I missed him.
Can't wait for the next chapter. :D
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i want to thank haku too. although kiba should have thought of something since he noticed it too.
person richon
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hoho haku is back , sumiko must behave properly, she just found his great ennemy !!! haru must be better, they start to understand him !! what will happen to en san and in san ?? this story is good, i keep looking for the next chapter every day !!
person roro237
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yea Baby!!! The princess is in THE house:) Haku-san moved like a brezzes and then BAMB the twister dropped her off in the corner:) I loved it! Papa was like a dream with Ha-chan. To-chan will be proud:) Thank you Queeny I loved it ^_^
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Haku's back! I'm cheering for everybody...especially Sasuke. My heart goes out to him.
person liby318
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love how Haku sweeps in and saves the day. Thanks for the great chapter.

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