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by mannahpierce

schedule August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Alright! The Zetsus are now Uchiha! Celebration!
person smauigirl
schedule August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! I laughed my ass off!
person Tati
schedule August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah. Zetsu and Tatsuji... what a great idea! Can't wait to read more.
person TanuKyle
schedule August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh god the last line was hilarious. xD

It had me in absolute STITCHES.
Which is kind of bad at 5am when you're trying to be sneaky. u3u;;;;

But this chapter was AMAZING.

I....confess, I have just re-read the whole saga, and it's really noticeable, having re-read the whole way through, how much thought and development you've put into everything, and how much you've improved as a writer.

PS. I finally write a decent review, yay! 8D
person angelj232000
schedule August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I felt so bad for Neji in this chapter. I like that Neji did things for Shika & I loved gettting a closer look at their relation ship. Keep up the awesome work. <3 HUGS!!!!!!!!
person Dorkchic
schedule August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just reading about the way Orochimaru was thinking about the children gave me a nasty case of the squickies. I even verbalised a long and loud 'ewwwwwww'. One hopes that Uchiha is able to put him out of everyone else's misery... and maybe save Pein (if there is enough left) while they are at it. Maybe by then he would have changed some of his views on some things.
person richon
schedule August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hhahah naru and saus you must find orochimaru soon and kill him, he is a pervert !! en san and in san gave a wonderful idear to shika, hope it will work !! this story is great see you soon!! love the way you change of point of view in very chapter !!
schedule August 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gross, Orochimaru!
person satterb
schedule August 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ewwww! Orochimaru is such a nasty maggot! It's thrilling to see you mesh all the characters together like this. I love to see how well you put the story together. I look forward to more!
schedule August 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Everything picks up some pace again! I'm glad. I love it when they all start to really DO something. Now that Shika is 'searching mode' things should move forward! He thinks and they do. I hated it when he was so distracted. And Klenn impressed me once again. I missed him! I was afraid that he had been so devastated by the humiliation with 'meeting the litter' that he was trying to stay away... LOL ^_^

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