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April 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Your character development is excellent. Ran's trust was slow, deliberate and believable. I'm glad that he's finally made his connection to Iruka.
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April 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm hoping that you don't have Naruto forgive Pein this time around. Everyone in Akatsuki needs to die. Horribly.
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April 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm about to cry. I still can't believe they killed him. Luckily Shikamaru knows that they're out there now. Fuck Akatsuki.
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April 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hoped that they would fail in their kidnapping somehow. I sucks that Akatsuki succeeded somehow.
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April 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm looking forward to Pein's sob story later on. It's going to have to be a doozy for me to care about him like I did for canon Pein.
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April 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am so jealous for Ranmaru. I don't want it to be booby trapped and I don't want Akatsuki to find out a way around any possible fixes. It doesn't help that he's not listed in your age list... I really hope he's okay. I'll find out next chapter.
Also, I chuckled when Naruto stated that his nest wasn't a sleeping nest.
Also, I chuckled when Naruto stated that his nest wasn't a sleeping nest.
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April 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
There were shivers down my spine when Sasuke decided to fight for the hybrids in the Warren. This is amazing.
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October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chapter 117-119. woot! grats on the completion of Iteration! i've thoroughly enjoyed reading Iteration in all of its entirety and i hope to read the sequel to it when it is ready. considering how difficult it is at times to decide how to end a story, the way Iteration concluded was very homey and kept to how the whole of the story centered around the us as Uchiha and not me the leader Uchiha.
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October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am happy for the very happy ending. I will miss the updates. I love all the characters so much. I eagerly await the next story. I can't wait to see where you will take things. As there is still some stuff unresolved. Keep up the awesome work. HUGS!!! <3
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October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It would be a terrible ending but it is a nice stop until the last part. The children have to grow up, Kono has to find new love, Orochimaru has to die and we need a way to keep Naruto alive (please). I can hardly breath until it continues but I think I will have to try ;-)