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person roro237
schedule August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
In the words of my crush "Awesome"! I'm looking forward to learning about the new cat ^_^
person telynaayuri
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow. poor ranmaru :(. i hope something bad happens to those spacers. keep writing please!
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am reading this story as I have read your others. I wasn't sure what to make of it at first--I didn't remember you mentioning this third installment, so it took me by surprise. Certainly what you have here is another hit--I can't see you writing anything that wouldn't be, frankly. And its focus is on this mission and this crew. I'm suitably drawn in at this point. I do adore your writing technique.

So...Konohamaru realizes how special he is compared to some others, and by consequence, how special he isn't. I wonder what changes this will inspire in him?
person RyuEarth
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that they are finally learning about the real world, outside the protection of the Uchiha! =)

But poor Ranmaru, I think that he has had it worse then Naruto! Dx

Thank you for the update!
person Moonmoore
schedule August 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I would like to be added to the emailing list, please. Email is: marqqui @ yahoo . com
All I have to say is that your story is amazing. I would like a little more focus in Naruto and Sasuke but I understand the need to develop the other characters too. Either way I will keep reading even if I don't review. Sorry for that. I hope you can add me. Take care! Hugs :)



Moonmoore
person Jenova625
schedule August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haku gets a baby?!?!?! *_* I am so excited I can't even explain...that's all I wanted to say >_>; That and to give you cookies for being an amazing author <3 *gives cookies shaped like the internet*
person RyuEarth
schedule August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved the part about Itachi not being able to cook lol
person roro237
schedule July 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
No way I didn't see it coming! Haku wanting a baby. An a girl at that. Well that part I could see:) Thank you I enjoyed the jouney so far:) Lets see what the space station has in store?!
person nivell
schedule July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great start to a new chapter in the Uchiha. Also, thanks for the list of characters...my mind boggles with the names of the characters. Seriously forgotten the names of the children! I get them mixed up with each other lol.
schedule July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So the new epic starts. lolz. Can't wait to see how it goes!

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