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January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is so amazing! it's so full of emotions, good and bad, and i'm really glad to be reading this! i don't usually read WIPs, but i'm definitely gonna stick around and see this through. Iruka and Kakashi are good for each other, and i thoroughly enjoy reading seme!Iruka, especially in a BDSM setting ^^
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just wow.
I know that is not a constructive review, but wow.
This chapter was worth the wait and I am on the edge of my seat for the next one.
I know that is not a constructive review, but wow.
This chapter was worth the wait and I am on the edge of my seat for the next one.
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think you're too hard on yourself! That chapter was amazing! I felt rage when Iruka expressed it, and I was shocked and appalled at Kakashi's behavior. I wanted to beat him myself. I really can't wait to see what happens next. I love this story. I hope you had a nice holiday, and I look forward to hearing more from you. Thanks for all your hard work!
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely amazing. I cannot wait to see how you continue from here.
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December 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dang, that wet dream was HOT! I think my computer will need a new fan if you continue in this vein... Awesome development, from Iruka getting hurt to Kakashi closing off totally, to them slowly getting warmer again, and then Genma.
Continue like that!
Sakiku
Continue like that!
Sakiku
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December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I feel so sorry for Kakashi, I hope he and Iruka will be friends soon again. Dont keep us waiting for to long but I guess thouse who wait for something good never wait to long;)
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December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter! I can understand kakashi's fear of caring for others, with how the last times went.
It's just not fair that nobody sees how much trauma he has. I wish that Iruka could see past kakashi's cold mask.
The wett dream was ^-^ very hot. It showed how far kakashi had fallen.
You wrote Iruka's pain well to. It must not be easy to have to lose what little he got from kakashi.
I'm looking forwards to the next chapter.
Good luck!
It's just not fair that nobody sees how much trauma he has. I wish that Iruka could see past kakashi's cold mask.
The wett dream was ^-^ very hot. It showed how far kakashi had fallen.
You wrote Iruka's pain well to. It must not be easy to have to lose what little he got from kakashi.
I'm looking forwards to the next chapter.
Good luck!
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December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwww. Kakashi! Stop being stubborn and self-sacrificial! grumble...
Anyway, great chapter! It was a surprise when Genma came back.
Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep going!
Anyway, great chapter! It was a surprise when Genma came back.
Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep going!
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December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WWWWAAAAAHHHHH! I want to cry!!!! Your stories always break my heart. I just want to slap Kakashi! I was hoping he might spy on Iruka and Genma getting their freak on, and really feel like an ass! LOL I've missed your writing. I was thrilled to see this updated. Thanks again for your hard work. Love ya, B
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November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really nice, keep it up I await the next chapter
p.s.: this story would be just fine on the regular fanfiction web site with an M rating. I think this story deserves more exposure than adult fanfic will give it
p.s.: this story would be just fine on the regular fanfiction web site with an M rating. I think this story deserves more exposure than adult fanfic will give it