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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm about as frustrated as Naruto is at this point.
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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH HELL!!! I love this! This mystery is so exciting! Lol. I can't wait to see more. Thanx
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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this!!!!! good story i love it when a story takes on this type of flow.... its very desperate on Narutos part and i hope it takes forever for him to get whats going on..... hell i want it to drag out for my own sake!!! anticipation is a good thing!!!!!! i hope u update soon!!!!
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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo hott! Your writing is superb! It creates the most delightful imagery..beautiful! And the dialogue is so true to the characters. I'm a big fan. I cant wait until the next chapter!
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July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hell yes! i love it! damn. keep goin'! :) very nicely written.
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July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is promising to be a very entertaining and delightful piece. I can't wait to see more.
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July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I had read the first part over on FF.NET and couldn't wait, wondering 'when is jelp doing the second part?' and here it is! naruto get's too caught up to even get a name? lol that's really sad! can't wait for the continuation.
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July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Sasuke's long on sexy mystique and short on bastardish assholery in this. It's a refreshing change.
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July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely brilliant. XD A blow job and run incident lol. Can't wait for mooooorreeee.