rate_review Reviews

I love this two stories! I sooo would love if they were continued too!

That was totally hot! I loved the power struggle between Naruto and Sasuke. The fic, overall, felt natural and unforced. It had a pretty good pace, but your setting was a little vague. I found myself wondering if they were in another hidden village, or what? Also, the bit about the unnamed girl that dies on their mission isn't really neccasary. It felt awkward for you to mention her if she wasn't going to be named, and her death wasn't going to be explained in more detail. Anyway, that's just something to think about.
I really enjoyed the fic. The dialogue was good too! Sasuke's responses to Naruto were in-character, as were Naruto's to Sasuke's. I look forward to reading more of your works. :]

Ack! Another, another, we need another. Pwease.