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for Warmth of a Cold Touch

by ChocolateRedVelvet

schedule March 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe not only an update but an update that had all of the yummy things I was hoping it would!!! I must say you are going even deeper into the realm then I thought you would for what I at first thought would be a simple rewrite of Naruto. You are doing a WONDERFUL job! <3
schedule March 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Finally!! A HakuxNaru fiction... I have been looking for one of these for AGES! They are so hard to find and so few are this good plot-wise or well written.

I will thank you for keeping Haku a guy. It just doesn't sit well with me when people turn him into a girl.

I eagerly await the next chapter of this story. so I do hope you'll update soon.(^.^)

Xoxo
Mj
person NarutoVixin
schedule February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
im all for Kimi being added to the mix. this is a very well written tale thank you for sharing you talent with those of us with none
schedule January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't put into words how happy this story makes me :) So true to the Naruto world and yet so different. I'm looking forward to more!
schedule November 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i din know this site had watch/fave lists... damn i wish it did. that'd make life so much easier. and you'd so totally be on it.. ^^
in spite of the alteration in the time line, i hope Naru swill still be there for Tsunade, konohamaru and Gaara.
schedule November 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think this is such an interesting story. I like the amount of detail you have put in developing the plot. You don't have filler scenes and I definitely get the feeling that all the scenes play a part in the coming storyline. I like that... it's like what they have to do for the movies!!! :)
schedule November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love that you came up with a way for the trio to be together and the clan be able to grow. Knowing Haku as we do, I doubt that girl will ever get close to him due to her desire for fame and power.
schedule November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. Especially since Naruto and Haku are together... Or will be lol. They make such a cute couple but not a lot of people write about them, especially with Naruto as the seme. And I think it should be a threesome, I mean doesn't Kimmimaro deserve some love too? Please keep up the good work and update soon. :)
schedule October 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love how this is going!!! I like how Haku reacted when Naruto told him that someday he would be following what Naruto told him to do :)

And some readers think of Haku as a girl? Noooo!!! Totally not! And I agree... Kimi is pretty cool how you've introduced him. This is such an interesting twist that includes so much of what's familiar... I really like reading this. And you have the next chapter pretty much done?!? Uh... where?!? Looking forward to reading more :)
person Kortir
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I find that Naru/Haku has a cute undertone in a way that Kimimaro would only spoil. I'm rather interested right now with the single pairing, so for what it's worth I'd vote for no Kimi. thanks...

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