rate_review Reviews

I like! I would love to read more, and you are doing great for a first time! Very interesting story.

Me Like! Me like!!

More please??!!?!?!?!

This looks promising as a story, but I recommend elaborating more, you seem to rush through topics or repeat ideas in the same paragraph, and i noticed several grammar errors and run on sentences. See if you can get someone to proofread your chapters or get a Beta.

But i look forward to future chapters and hope you continue to grow as an author.

I think this is nice.
But Sakura is out of character. I would hope that she would be more considerate.

Looks really promising, I look forward to seeing this AU Naruto...what about the AU Sasuke will he be there as well?

I think it is an ok beginning but it is way to short in length.