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for Sight For Sore Eyes

by Jelp

schedule June 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story so much!! I am thrilled over how Naruto keeps working to get Sasuke to live and how they are so like themselves you can really picture their expressions and the energy behind their actions. Very Steamy and Erotic!! So happy to see Sasuke go along with Naruto to become his Captain.....bet he sees how many ways he can totally get Naruto back for all the times they had fun with him chained to the wall....lol SWEET!!
person moodysavage
schedule June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well THAT certainly was...(big smile)...really good. Really awesome. Really....lol...awesomely awesome. I loved the detail you built up with how Sasuke was really giving up his will to live and how Naruto would do anything to keep him alive. I also liked how the relationship changed slowly but not intentionally. It just built together with the circumstances. Very well done. Thanks!!!
person Ella
schedule June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*drools* wow, I don't even know any words to describe how hot that was! Perfectly IC, interesting plot...I can't find anything to complain about XD Never stop writing NaruSasu fics ! You're definitely one of the best authors!
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Good story as usual.
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Three simple words: I loved it!
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Truly excellent. Thank you.
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know I gush over your writing so much all over the fandom....but may I say Dayummm girl that was some sexy sexy smut!!!! I loved Eye See, because I did not see the ending coming....but this this explains why the sex in ES was so kinky....and all kinds of sexy.....Bows to you again.....

Can we declare you the Queen of OneShots yet??? Serioulsy I love all your stuff, but One Shots that are over 9,000 words and are so darned good they leave you craving for more...where you're like where is then next chappie dammit? and then you are all oh yeah it's a one shot......yeah I declare you Queen!!!!

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