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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Warning - NOT a Flame
Nothing wrong with a Kiba/Neji catagory.. The only thing wrong is it was too fast! It was like a wam bam thank you ma'am. It just needed.. well.. MORE.. like detail & emphasis. But again not a bad pairing. When I first saw the summary I was all 'ooooh!' finished reading 'eh'
You just need more practice!! I'm sure you'll get better!! Don't Give Up!!
Nothing wrong with a Kiba/Neji catagory.. The only thing wrong is it was too fast! It was like a wam bam thank you ma'am. It just needed.. well.. MORE.. like detail & emphasis. But again not a bad pairing. When I first saw the summary I was all 'ooooh!' finished reading 'eh'
You just need more practice!! I'm sure you'll get better!! Don't Give Up!!