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for Sand Away From The Desert

by BrightFireStar

schedule September 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this story was so cute!
i love it.
cant wait to read more.
XD.

~Golden Kitsune~
schedule July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love your story! PLease update soon! :) GaaNaru forever <3
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Naruto went from zero to seducer in, like, 2.5 seconds! No awkward fumbling or anything.

I would point out how this suddenly seems out of character, but then I realize this is after the time jump so Naruto has had all those years observing his ero-senin and hanging out with whores... plus it was just good old fashioned fun reading and ended with some sappy cuddling that made me go "aawwwwwwww...." lol


Keep up the good work!
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love how their relationship is progressing. cant wait for more.
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schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet. Gaara is the most adorable uke ever. <3
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
All right Naruto! That's how it's done!
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schedule February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Six was great. I love the abuse of ninjutsu. XD
schedule February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww.. their first kiss and subsequent embarrassing happy blushes. hehehe. Too bad Naruto's gonna be away on a mission so soon. I hope the two of them are able to chat (or what not ;P) before he goes off with big brother and the Konohamaru squad.

Keep up the great work!
schedule February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Strange she's allowing a foreign shinobi to assist in a meeting. Great chappy..love the development and that it's not rushing.
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

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