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March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think that you meant that Kakashi was 'writhing' (squirming, or moving in a sensual and sometimes serpentine way). I do not think you meant that he was 'withering' (shrivelling, and drying up...i.e. flowers wither and die). Other than that the fic was hot!
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January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I adore KakaxGai. This was nicely done!