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February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very, very nice. For some reason this couple gets me every time i see them. Great job
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January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your description is good and I can see everything that's happening clearly. I'm not sure why you divided it into two chapters though and with no context to why these things are happening it's kind of boring.
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January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well done~! Unique pairing works very well; wonderful relationship dynamics.