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for Broke Straight Guys

by KaraMayonakaSora

person Carousel
schedule May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic. Absolutely fantastic. I love this story so much. I like how Sasuke got his start.
person Tanishaa
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Halarious. I kinda feel bad for Kirabee though. Well I hope all things work out, and I hope Garra and Naruto get together! Andwho I can't wait for the next update, I look forward to reading more!
person alice
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oooh, thanks so much for this story! you had me in tears (of laughter, no worries) more often than i can count. i've found the 1st chapter of BSG on the pit (or lj, i don't really remember) some time ago and thought it was a one-shot. i was absolutely delighted when i discovered today that it isn't!

your lemon is exquisit, your dialogues are hilarious...

Sasuke? what a prick! i love him, haha. N&G are awesome of course. i wonder if we'll see Haku again? ...and killerbee? the talk he has with naruto on the cab on their way to the theater? i adored it. his calm, his staightforwardness...without claiming to "have it all figured out". also he is muslim, what a nice touch! i love how realistic you're keeping things. i like the Ten from the manga and i like yours, a pity that Sai is SUCH a creep.

durr, i suck at reviewing, but i'm smitten with your story& wanted you to know. keep it up, i can't wait see the plot thicken! <3
schedule March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I sometimes feel that way when I realize I've been reading these things since 2006. I mean yeah, it doesn't feel that long, but its been 4 freaking years already! Holy fuck!

THis chapter was hilarious, btw.
Keep up the good work!
person Eremi22
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Begone, Satan!"

I haven't laughed this hard in quite a while. Thanks ^_^
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"You sick fuck! You jizzed in my sock!"

BEST. LINE. IN. FANFICTION.

EVER.
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
rofl @ begone satan wtf lol. My cousin says that to me when I annoy her rofl.
I like the reference to the reggae song in chapter 4. I haven't read this fic in 4ever O.O
person Carousel
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was epically hilarious. You are amazing. *bows down*
person KingCobra
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm gonna go out on a limb and guess Shikamaru?
schedule March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is the best Gaara fic I've read yet. Good job! Mysterious roommate, hmm who could it be...

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