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for Just One More Birthday

by xtabluarasa

schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hurray for remission! A real eyeopener, this fic. Looking forward to reading the next update.
person xmc@pneumonia.sick.hq
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i'm not much of a reviewer, but for the sake of updates on this story, here i am, offering up my homemade cookies, erm, i mean my unworthy opinion/review. (puts cookies away)
to say that i like ur idea/plot would be an understatment, b/c i love it. its safe to say i'm addicted to this storyline and would be devastated if it was discontinued later on. my cookie-making skill would suffer too.
so for the sake of my cookie-making skills, and my future victums, um, i mean cookie-tasters, don't abandon the story lol
but in the meantime, have a cookie for a job well done. (hands u a chocolate-walnut cookie)
person GellyBelly
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg! I feel bad for Naruto! All his friends left him! Love this story by the way :)
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Of course you should continue! This is fantastic!

And I agree, we're writers and these are our stories. We can bitch if we want.
person crystalprison
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
personally I really like this story. I hope you continue with it. I know what its like to not get a lot of support though, so I could understand....
person RREADERR
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You have to continue this! You explained everything so well it reminds me of my sleep paralysis I experience constantly. Please, please continue!!
person Fluister
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ah, wow. very good! I love the way you describe Naruto's feelings and thoughts in this story. Heh, and I like Gaara. I'm curious about the next chapter!

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