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April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm usually not into NaruSasu stuff unless it's really good, and this is REALLY REALLY GOOD. I think I've been checking every hour for the last 2 days if a new chapter came out, lol. You write beautifully, and I will continue to be unable to patiently wait for your next chapter. ;D Lots of love.
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April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I thought I would tell you just exactly what my very favorite part of this chapter was....
"He needs a bath." Naruto spoke with an air of authority and finality that brooked no argument. Soon, Akamaru was neck deep in suds, being cleaned within an inch of his life. He was then dried and coiffed and was finally able to exit the bathroom, tossing his head and swaggering with all the confidence of an international supermodel. Of course, Naruto then deemed the bathroom dirty again, and attacked it with renewed gusto.
"Kiba…"
"I had a bath this morning, I swear!"
Laughed so hard picturing Akamaru strutting his stuff like the supermodel he is.....LOL
"He needs a bath." Naruto spoke with an air of authority and finality that brooked no argument. Soon, Akamaru was neck deep in suds, being cleaned within an inch of his life. He was then dried and coiffed and was finally able to exit the bathroom, tossing his head and swaggering with all the confidence of an international supermodel. Of course, Naruto then deemed the bathroom dirty again, and attacked it with renewed gusto.
"Kiba…"
"I had a bath this morning, I swear!"
Laughed so hard picturing Akamaru strutting his stuff like the supermodel he is.....LOL
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April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This hath taken quite a turn for the angsty. Poor Kiba having to help Naruto through it all. Thank you for updating.
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April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love this idear, of stage 1 and 2. naruto a maniac freak, it's unbelivable !!!hopefully your computer will stay on a little longer for another chapter!! i love your work !! see you soon
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April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn you Sasuke!!! And we were moving on too! I can't wait to see the next chapter. (Prays that the compy gods allow him to life some time longer)
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April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha 'I need to clean!'
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April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just loved it! You have a great sense of humor:) All the stuff Kiba did trying to cheer up his bestfriend. Shikamaru doing his part. While I was being sad with Naruto I cracked up at the Knights of Naruto round table:) good one! Naruto dream with Akamaru on his chest was something else that had me going:) Stage two I think we've all been there and you nailed it! This chapter is great really! You covered all the base in a delightful way:) Then Sasuke showing up and blocked! Naruto on the other side of the door blocked! That just broke my heart. It has to be untill some changes are made. I hope that helped Sasuke realize that. I love this story! I was hoping your computer was still working:) Thank goodness it is! ^_^
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April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto. Just when he thought we was progressing through his grief, Sasuke has to show up. What will it take for Sasuke to realize what he keeps rejecting between them. Hopefully Sakura stays away while Naruto recovers. Good to see he has some true friends in Kiba and Shika. Hmmm... would be interesting to see Neji me the friends.
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April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
kyah! kyah ! kyah!! i squealed like a little girl when i saw UPDATE!! You do know that this is my favorite story on AFF right now, right?? Great!
The exorcist was scary as shit! why did you have to remind me....God..i love and hate sasuke. Right now i want to cut off his balls and twist off his dick before i put lime on the wound. WHY THE FUCK DID HE HAVE TO BREAK MY DOBE'S HEART!!?? HE's BACK TO FUCKING SQUARE ONE BECAUSE OF DUCK BUTT asshole!!fuck! i'm pissed!!!really!!
*whispers to Naruto*-'don't worry hun, everything will be alright' *kisses*
Kage, i want you to ban that son-of-a-bitch from coming close to my blue eyed angel for a while!! ok??! Let Naru-chan at least lick his wounds...
Also, can you give us a warning with how many chapters are remaining? I don't want to suffer an aneurysm while reading to see it's the last...*screams*
The exorcist was scary as shit! why did you have to remind me....God..i love and hate sasuke. Right now i want to cut off his balls and twist off his dick before i put lime on the wound. WHY THE FUCK DID HE HAVE TO BREAK MY DOBE'S HEART!!?? HE's BACK TO FUCKING SQUARE ONE BECAUSE OF DUCK BUTT asshole!!fuck! i'm pissed!!!really!!
*whispers to Naruto*-'don't worry hun, everything will be alright' *kisses*
Kage, i want you to ban that son-of-a-bitch from coming close to my blue eyed angel for a while!! ok??! Let Naru-chan at least lick his wounds...
Also, can you give us a warning with how many chapters are remaining? I don't want to suffer an aneurysm while reading to see it's the last...*screams*
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April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
To be honest, I wasn't really expecting that. I loved stage two though, so that made up for it. Poor Naruto, being demoted back down... stinking Sasuke. I know I was rooting for him at the beginning of this story but now...well, he can just fall down a conveniently located abyss.