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I have to give Naruto props for being able to end it that way. I know it hurt....

Neji is awesome!! First time review here on this site and I chose your story to do it. Its great! You have the best lines in this story. I laugh so much and felt so much. Love the dynamics between the characters and can't wait to see how it plays out. Thanks for sharing your gifts with us!!

Ahhh!

1) Way to go Naruto! Take back your life. Fight those bad decisions and impulses!! Heil Naru-Hitler!! lol

2) Go Neji! You keep working towards those (wet) dreams!! hehehe

3) Man, Sasuke is spiraling out of control. Next step is xanax. o_O

Thank you for updating.
Poor Sasuke. Some of us really have a hard time removing our heads from our asses.

it's so sad !!! naru and sasu really break up !!sasu you need to accept yourself and be brave. be the knight naru want you to do!! i love this stroy !! see you soon

I believe thinking about the past really helps people to cope. a flashback may really help sasuke to realize what he's missing. WOuld he rather spend his life living up to his father's expectations or a happy one with the one he truly loves? I hope he finds the answer soon. The longer he takes the farther Naruto drifts away...

And there comes the angst again ;_;...
I can't help but transfer my usual hate of Sasuke to Sakura in this one... maybe because they all are kinda pre-shippuden like in this AU. And I DID dislike Sakura far more strongly than Sasuke back then. Feel like saying: "Get a clue, woman D:So yeah... keep up the good work!

I think I'm beginning to channel you ...
(runs of to declare self high priestess and official sacrificer at your shrine)
because I wrote this *before* I even got to the whole beautiful wind saga part ...

"I had felt that this was your most painful Sasuke yet. And boy, I was right! Naruto is this man's air.
(see what I men about the channeling!!!) He is terrified to admit this, to Naruto or himself. Because if he did the pain of not having what he wants would be unbearable and if that hair fine tether to Naruto snapped,
his breath gone, Sasuke would cease to exist. So he pretends it casual and denies the love more to himself
than even to Naruto.

O.o (okaaay...enough of my ramblings...)

have to say thanks for all the little references, clones, fire, wind affinity, nice nod to Masashi-sansei :D
and I can't be the only one who feels sorry for the main three (yes that includes Sakura)
lying to get what you want isn't good, but she truly believes that her love will be enough for both of them
and I kind of admire her gumption and really had he said "hey babe, I'm gay" she might have given up...or proclaimed she would cure him.
Sasuke really is just emotionally retarded and confused and trying to be the good son, he honestly thinks he's doing right, that's why he has always garnered my most sympathy. Naruto is not without fault, he could have pushed but fear kept him from doing so...poor boys.

ahhhh I'm rambling again!!!!!!!

well thank you for the beautiful, emotionally charged words, as always:)

Ack! More depression!! Oh god. At least Naruto is one step closer now to moving on.

Sasuke's cries of family and his textbook interpretation of are a real deal breaker. He basically just told Naruto he was worthless in comparison. I can understand where he's coming from but he's fighting everything he ever wanted every step of the way. Its horrible.


Keep up the great work. Every chapter you weave reads like poetry.

Such a sad and beautifully rich descriptive chapter. The whole fire/wind part just knocked my socks off ;-) Love this story! Also when is Neji making another appearance? Will he be a viable alternative from Sasuke who seems to be unwilling to go for his happiness?