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by KageKitsuneXXX

person animelover
schedule May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
whoa, what a cliffie ... a perfect one at that! ladies and gentlemen, let the fur fly as the cat fight of the century begins! ;-) i'll be waiting with my bag of catnip. LOL!
schedule May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE. YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON!!. Yay Neji and Naru finally got together. I know this is probably SasuNaru but can they stay together for a little while longer or at least have an alternate ending for us NejiNaru fans out here. Pretty pretty please.
person Grazie
schedule May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please you have to continue this fic. Ansosa much more looking forward to next chapter
schedule May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHH FUCK!!! I really hope that Sasuke doesn't go mental and breaks Neji's ass before naruto comes back!! HAHAH..how is he going to take the news of them being together?? I knew that Neji was a virgin, it just..felt like it really..they are sweet as a couple but where is the electric spark?!! I want to get electrocuted bya a pairing! They don't vut it for me at all!! *secretly hopes sasuke beats neji to a pulp!* Can't wait!! *rubs hands together*
person Anon
schedule May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!!!!! Why did you stop there?... such a tease. Totally love the developments between Naru & Neji. But now I wonder if Neji and Sasuke will get into a Bruce Lee inspired fight of their own before Naru returns. Can't wait for the update.
person fhb
schedule May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
perfect. sasuke deserves it.
person lividangel
schedule April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Danka schoen, darling, danka schoen...

just had to throw that in there;)
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why it took me so long to read this chapter... guess because I didn't want to see Naruto dwelling on sad memories of could have been. But it was sad and good and I like the two b-days but still you shall not sway me... I shall not like Sasuke in this... I should destroy him in all my stories for what he did to Naruto in this one >< *shakes fist of empowerment* he must pay somehow but awww... he went all death of the valley with the 'you don't understand cause you never had a real family'. I wanted to V8 bitch slap him for that even though my treacherous heart went all goey when Sasuke said wait. But no... Naruto must focus on Neji now. He is your future Naruto... don't make me shake your head like a eightball because I say so. Please Neji and Naruto pairing please because Sasuke is pissing me off big time. He doesn't get it, love how you make him not get it cause he sees things logically and not emotionally. Meh, love all, done rant, gone.
person Allandaa
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Update! Please, I'm begging here! The plot's simply great, and heartbreaking because of it; I almost want Naruto to leave Sasuke for Neji (though if you found a better way to make Naru and Sakura happy I'll take that ^^ )... I'm always one to live the story fully, so imagine how devastated I'm going to be if this ends baddly. I'm counting on you!
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I know I don't like Sasuke in this story, the little creep but I don't want him to go all suicidy on me @_@

I mean... I can't imagine Naruto having a date with Neji at Sasuke's funeral... be a sucky first date. Let him go all emo and sad but I still want Neji and Naruto. I like the budding relationship and Kiba's description of Neji was priceless. And omg I want to see Sai's private collection too. Smart Neji trying to see it, at least if Naruto didn't talk to him now he'd have something to think about when he's along <.<;

Meh but good, sad but good. I don't want Naruto to relapse. Sasuke is like a freaking drug and once Naruto gets it out of his system he should try not to relax. I swear if a cigarette could talk it'd be like like Sasuke 'I just want to talk, we don't really have to do anything'. Meh the lies. Love it... more please.

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