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by mindslip

schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was laughing so hard at the car part. Sniffing the asphalt, tch. More please!
person inuspike
schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting chapter. I must say, I thoroughly enjoy Naruto and Sasuke's bickering, you write it so well. Love the cliff you've left us hanging off of. Can't wait to see what happens to the boys next. ^^
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, though a dump is an interesting place to start a story.
person tovah
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter was interesting and pretty good but the text format on the second chapter was messed up, I didn't even bother to continue reading it.
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I can't wait to see how they're gonna work it out! Love your fic!!
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was compelled to leave a review. I loved chapter two, particularly the last part in the hotel. I haven't laughed like that in ages. Really looking forward to more.
person Dorkchic
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The shower should be an event. I wonder if they will go with one stands on one side of the curtain while the other showers and vice versa or (since they have already seen each other naked at the various onsens) if they will just share the shower and try not to touch each other.
I am curious about what Kyuubi is doing/thinking all this time and if he can shed some light on the subject. Another method of finding out could be Sasuke going into Naruto's mind and physically looking at the memories since attempting to remember on their own causes pain. If nothing else and they cannot get back then they would probably do really well in action films, japanese game shows, or appearing at various conventions as characters. LOL!
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering when we'd get an update! Was not disappointed at all~ I love your Sasuke and his sarcasm. His and Naruto's bantering makes me giggle, XD. And I love their reactions to our world(? I'm guessing). How Naruto has insane ideas about aliens and Sasuke's darker understandings- it's a great contrast. Keep up the awesome work~
schedule February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahahah! Fuck, this is brilliant! "Actually waltzing isn't really our style" XDD.
I really hope you continue this soon, I'm dying with curiosity about what's going to happen :b
schedule January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... I am so intrigued its crazy! So many questions! Where are they?! How'd they get there?! What are they gonna do next?! I really hope you continue this story so I can not die of anticipation while waiting for the answers! Your grammar is flawless and the set up for the story is amazing!!! You did a really fantastic job of describing the setting! I could really see them and what was going on in my head while I was reading! Both are very in-character which I, also an author, find hard to keep up with! But you did it with finesse. I so look forward to the next installment!!

~Cianis

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