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for Forever

by FireSnake

schedule December 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So much has changed over the course of time, yet some things stay the same.

Keep up the good work.
schedule December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I never thought that this was narusasu (lol) I was just saying that I really appreciated that aspect of it.

I thought this chapter was interesting. And well written. It didn't seem like too much was happening in the naru shino department but I think I see where this is going (I could be wrong. Actually... I probably am. lol) and I like it. So I hope you have an easy time writing this cause I want to read more. Fast. Like really fast. Like if you have another chapter posted when I finish this review, that would be awesome.
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. I look forward to more. I like how you captured Naruto and Sasuke in this ordeal. Very deep. You must complete this fic, it's epic ^_^
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Keep up the good work.
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I cried. I'm a huge narushino fan but I also love narusasu and this was just so heartbreaking and authentic. I really appreciate the sense of reality you managed to work into a situation that could never actually happen (the healing). Good job.
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what a great start, love it. Cant wait to see what happens next.

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