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October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!
This was a very well-written story - I'm not actually a fan of PWP, but you did a wonderful job. As a two-shot, there's not much criticism I can provide, since your spelling and grammar are flawless, and plot and characterization aren't much of a factor. However, I couldn't help but notice there were no reviews, and that's always a shame when a nice story like this is posted. I want to encourage you to write more, and I'll definately be there to cheer you on. I'd love to see a longer story from you, if you ever feel up to it. I wish you the best of luck with your writing in the future!
Yours,
Repression
This was a very well-written story - I'm not actually a fan of PWP, but you did a wonderful job. As a two-shot, there's not much criticism I can provide, since your spelling and grammar are flawless, and plot and characterization aren't much of a factor. However, I couldn't help but notice there were no reviews, and that's always a shame when a nice story like this is posted. I want to encourage you to write more, and I'll definately be there to cheer you on. I'd love to see a longer story from you, if you ever feel up to it. I wish you the best of luck with your writing in the future!
Yours,
Repression