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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes, definitely an interesting start. I really like how observant Naruto is, and how he was able to catch the criminal. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! ^^
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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing intro chapter. I like it.
Can't wait to see where you go with this. Keep up the good work!
Can't wait to see where you go with this. Keep up the good work!