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by momhuey8

person Anon
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As I said before I'm humbled by your writing. Poor Sasuke having to explain all the craziness in Naru's head...I wonder what Neji is thinking....Can't wait until next chapter!!!
person LadyWolf
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sakura is too good at that genjutsu but I hope somebody finds out what that bitch is doing to him!!
I can't stand her!!!

I almost cried when he tried to kill himself over and over again.!

post soon!!!
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very intense here as always! Great job!
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg!! this story is getting seriously scary! o_o
person rala
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is so depressing! Naruto is amazingly perfect the way he is and he shouldn't feel this sad. Make them happy again damn it >.< It's hard to read this story because it so sad, can we have everything be good again? Please. Sasuke and Naruto should me happy. That should happen and Sakura should die...right now. I blame her for all the sadness. Please write more soon! You are doing a good job...just more happy. Please. With sugar on top?
person Sigart
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh gawd. I think I'm going to be sick. Seriously. What Sakura's doing is.. it's... I don't have words for how monstrous it is.

The story is brilliant btw. Keep it up.
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg even with the cuffs off he can't fight it. Will this be permanent damange >.>
person qwerty
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally Tsunade checked Naruto's health!! Good God, I can't stand the tension and anticipation anymore. I hope Sakura gets what's coming to her ten-fold.
Amazing writing as always. Great chapter!
Keep going!

p.s. I want to read the other story "constellations" but I'm afraid of the major character death warning. I don't mind if the death is someone like Sakura, Tsunade, etc but if it's Naruto or Sasuke....no can do. Could you tell me if the death is someone other than Naruto or Sasuke? Thanks.
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Angst overload.
Good, but bad cause some parts are kinda choppy.

I'm happy that there's an update though! ;D
person Dorkchic
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely hideous things need to happen to Sakura! The girl is obviously deranged if she can not only do that to some one who has saved her miserable existance more than once, but to so on a continual basis- in essence, torturing him to death. There is no "Oops, I was in the moment and completely out of my mind for a second there. I don't think I even realized what I was doing." On a side note... Why hasn't Sasuke examined him with the sharingan? You would think that with him being a genius and Naruto continually being out of it he would have at least checked and seen evidence of long term exposure to repeated genjutsus. Heck, even if Naruto had not referenced things that had not been said or done in real life then just the continual headaches and sleeping should have set him off. If nothing else, why not talk to Tsunade about his case if he is so concerned? She does know that they are together and even if that weren't the case Naruto is supposed to be his guard. Sorry, I get on a rant sometimes about things I am very interested in. Please, please, please update soon! I have to know what happens and I hope it involves something happening to that pink-haired harpy that involves a the rest of her lifetime with a colostomy bag and dribbling when she speaks. People who betray trust like that need to live out reletively short, meaningful, pain-ridden lives strapped to a metal table under Ibiki's careful watch. Yeah, serious tangent there! LOL

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