rate_review Reviews

I've only read the first chapter and am completely hooked on it!! I love how the details entrap you into the story and keep you from looking away . It's like the house could fall down around you and you wouldn't notice it because your so cought up in the story to notice. So excited to read what happens in the next chapters. I love all the details and descriptions...and the steamy happenings to Naruto and Naruto/Sasuke is just HOT!!!


LOVE IT!!

Timber

That second chapter was PURE SWEET TORTURE!!!! I really enjoyed all of it even with the interuptions....that just adds to Naruto.....thus our collective torture.....and makes us anticipate how the rest of this tale unfolds.

I LOVE IT!!! GRINNING LIKE AN IDIOT but COMPLETELY HAPPY about it!! :)

Timber

SHOCK....sniff....how could you do that to us....sniff.....so close .........aaaaaaaaaaaaa I WANT MORE!! You know I'll be at work tomorrow wishing the day to move faster so I can come home and jump on my computer just to check for a new update. That will so be wishful thinging I know. OHHHHHH the torture with being patient. CRY T_T


I LOVED this chapter!!!! I loved how the characters were developed and the details in how they related and comunicated with each other. I enjoyed the details of their movements and surroundings. I thinks its those details the give the characters so much life and energy.

Can't wait till the next chapter is out!!!! :)

Timber

Damn, so close. Stupid voice of reasoning and logic. lol Another lovely chapter, my dear, and I dare say it was one of the most... tantalizing? ^^ Can't wait for the next update!

Nicely done. I like the latin - and really appreicate the translations, cause I have no clue when it comes to latin - and I'm really getting sucked into the mystery of what is happening, and why Sasuke's chakra is the one in Naruto's system.

Oh, and the little excepts of the sex scenes are totally hot.

Hunger gets what hunger wants!
Anyway, I'm officially addicted to you way of writing/plot.
I really do hope you update soon, or else I'm going to go crazy!
Happy NarutoSasuke day!

Oooo, you're a bitch with that cliffhanger. Please please pleeeease update soon or I'm going to die and I'll write your name on the suicide note! D< ...Not really =D

WHOA! THAT TOTALLY BLEW ME OFF!! I am all excited now.., oh my.. please update soon for I will be having restless sleep thinking about it until the next chapt! Arigatogozaimasu! Onegai~~

Evil? No.

Horrible?

Yes.

Terrible, horrible, Evil.

Ending it like that, giving that cliff hanger. You should be ashamed, leaving your readers waiting. Or at least write chapters faster. :D

By the way, Sasuke should definitely be uke the first time.

Great chapter! I love the dramatic tension in this one between the characters. Damn it Sasuke! Give in!!