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for Lilith's heir

by Necros2303

schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love where this story is going please update soon.
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You've put way too many idea's into my head.

I want to see the twins. Now. Get writing!

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schedule October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kitten is adorable. I can just see her enjoying some milk from the other girls!
schedule October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter can't wait for the next one update soon.
person VFSNAKE
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NICE! HE GOT YUGITO! Now he needs Temari, Hana, Kin, Tayuya, Karin, and anyone else he comes across. Have Gaara kill Sasuke.
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Haku... What did she ever do to you?

...Ah well, lets see some Temari already!

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schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am a bit upset with Haku being dead, couldn't Naruto have broken her over time to be his loyal plaything? Or made Zabuza discard her and taken her in a moment of vulnerability?

But the scene with Tsunami was all I dreamed of and more, very nice. I suggest Naruto go on vacation to Wave a few times in the future.
person VFSNAKE
schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Shame Haku died. She could have been a loyal slave to him if things were manipulated in the right manner. Write more ASAP! What about Hana? Or Tsume?
person Leria
schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not a good chapter, this latest one. You didn't have to make it bloodline stealing, you could make it permanent bloodline COPYING and therefore have spared Haku's life.
schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter.

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