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December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The story is good, very detailed though you could have Naruto be a little more forceful. Anyways i was just wondering if you plan on continuing the story
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November 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, you have got to continue this story! Its sooo HOT! And please put more clone gangbanging like with Tsunami, that was great. Maybe have some of the girls use a henge or something to temporarily turn into a futa for a gangbang without clones. That'd be good too.
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August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow, world domintion here we come... is Naruto still fond of Iruka? And what will he do about Madara? I like that he treats his bitches well.
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August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
are u gonna continue or u gonna stop this FF and only write de V2?
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July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very Nice. I like the demonic twist to Naruto.
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June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, and I hope you'll update it soon. Though I'm a bit sad. Did Hinata really had to be enslaved? It's just like Tenten said, she would do anything for her Naruto-kun. Wouldn't it be possible for him to give her back her own will later? I know it wouldn't probably change anything, because she would still stay with him, it just feels better :). Never mind, looking forward for more of your story.
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good story hope to read more chapters soon
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March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi great story so far and i cant wate for more updates hope thy come soon and realy like your work very good.
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February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
kinky and fetishy and bloody good
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November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know that this is supposed to be a place where you can explore your fantasies and whatnot, so I won't say anything about that. But at the very least, improve your writing. You've got run-on sentences everywhere, and your quality of work is sloppy in general.