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by kaiyousama

schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOT HOT HOT.. everything about this is so relaxing and naughty at the same time!! can't resist.great story and i cant wait for the sequel *wink*
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was sick dear authoress truly sick how you just ended that chapter like there. Where is that mouth!?!? I must know!!! You have me curious because this couple is working against time. How will they be salvaged?? AND WHERE IS THAT MOUTH?!?!
person airhead622
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol i no!!! that darn plot is always in the way....
but on the other hand without it there wouldn't b so many lemons :)
so i think the trade off is more than adequate :D
oh and my sick lil fangirl mind really wants sasuke to use that whole bottle on
poor lil naru-chan *mwahaahaahaah* but on the other hand i kinda feel bad
for naruto's abused body..... but is it abuse if he likes it?? :)
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay for sweaty man-sex (and double extra-large tubes of lubricant!)!
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nay to the poetry, yay to the angst. But I still think Naruto should hurt Sasuke accidentally and cause Sasuke to be an ass to him. :D

Also, wouldn't it be interesting if Naruto tied Sasuke up and had a vibrating butt plug in Sasuke's rear while he rode Sasuke's member with the cock ring on it? Very sexy, yes yes yes.
person LadyWolf
schedule August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwww!! I have that the blonde is leaving :O( I hope this has a happy ending...;o)

Post soon!
schedule August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
DX

I'm sad now. I love SasuNaru, but dammit, you keep inserting lovely NaruSasu ideas into your plots~! DX

Anyways, you should have an angsty chapter where, when Naruto goes back home, he's a complete ass to Sasuke and hurts Sasuke's feelings, only to have a sudden revelation a month later in the U.S. Then, when he realizes, he wants to talk to Sasuke, but Sasuke won't talk to him so he flies out to Japan to apologize in person~! That would make me squee too~!
schedule August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
=D
schedule August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap, anticipation! What a sweet date! Eel soup? Never had it.

Naruto's in trouble, LOL...
person gingitsune
schedule August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!It's so sweet that Sasuke is showing a bit of himself by bring Naruto to his favourite restaurant. I also like how you are depicting Naruto's dilemma & yet despite those reasons, his undeniable attraction to Sasuke.

Amazing job as usual!

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