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by kaiyousama

schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LoL omg reading the part about the housekeeper going after Naruto with the broom... It made me LoL haha!And I'm glad Itachi is back I was beginning to feel bad for poor Dei =3
schedule May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LoL i love the whole nipple clamps thing haha
person Anon
schedule May 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
our little blonde is so naughty.
i can't wait until he meets itachi, hopefully the older raven will like him.
i'm just dying for you to get to the angsty part of the plot where they have to go their saparate ways.
not that i'm not enjoying the smex...cuz the smex is good.
person airhead622
schedule May 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh my GOD!!! i'm so excited to see u update!!!
i feel like i haven't read anything from you in about a year
when i saw this i got all tingly and excited ;) i could just glop you for
this wonderful update!!! much love (and cookies) keep up the awesome work :)
schedule May 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Now we know that one half of the equation aka Naruto is willing to make this work! :D LOL btw are you going to introduce Jealous!Sasuke? :D I recommend Gaara as a potential competitor :D

Great job on the writing again!
schedule May 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How the hell is Sasuke supposed to get anything done if Naruto keeps texting him photographs of his sinfully sexy body?
person Anon
schedule May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!... Finally you're back. Love the interactions between Naru & Sasu and can't wait to see how the introductions are going to go when Itachi arrives.
schedule May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this side story!!!!!! Wow!!! This is def different from how I would have envisioned Ita & Dei getting together but wow, still really good!

Glad to see that you're back! :D Not sure how this story will go but can't wait to read more!

Btw I went back & re-read everything & realized the Shika's name is spelt wrongly?

Anyway, good job! :D
person Dorkchic
schedule May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Naruto should play with one or two of Sasuke's newly delivered toys and the he should snap a few pictures with his cell and send them to Sasuke at work. LOL!
person Anon
schedule May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this fiction....I thought I had read it on another site, and I lost track of it couldn't remember the name of it, but I am SOOOOOO glad I found this update YAY!!! LOVE IT it's great and man that chapter on Dei almost made me cry....*looks around to see if Itachi is watching....then pets Dei and squeezes him hard*...poor thing I wish Madara had killed the bastard slave trader...

Can't wait for more...thanks for the update

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