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oh i do hope you finish soon. this is so good!! also i would recommend putting this on fanfiction dot net. its clean enough and it also has a way for us readers to subscribe to the fic and know when a new chapter is up. update soon!!

Well. i was thinking of writing a story like this. no lie i was set up to do it but, it seems that you've already have :( i love that show i was addicted! still am :3. Though, i was going to base it strictly, on the story line :/ unless i can do they kiss again? :D?? idk but goodjob and i hope to read more.

oh hun im so sorry. i admire the fact that you are managing to do so much! i know if it was me i think i would just brake apart, my mom is my best friend. *hugs* on another more happy note i really like this story and i hope that you continue it soon but i totally understand if you don't

I hate these stories! You know why? Because despite the obviousness of it, it pulls me in, tears me up and then ... (yes incomplete). Otherwise, again, I love :)

I like the fact that the Hanabira or whatever girl exists and that Sasuke recognises her beauty and his ability to fall in love with her...I wonder though, does he have a choice in the matter of his heart. Personal experience tells me no, but this is Sasuke. I cannot believe Itachi asked that of him.

Interesting tidbits with Itachi being blinded. It's like you're in canon but on a parallel line LOL.

Pretty please update. Can't wait to find out more :)

sasuke became aware of his feelings quite fast and he accepted them pretty quickly too, if only everyone could be like that.i dont know what to say about itachi i guess he wants to keep his brother close because sasuke could always just leave konoha again and ask naruto to come with him you can do whatever you want outside.well aside from a few spelling errors its a great sotry hope you can update soon

OOOOOH!!! Nice chappie!!!! 'Tachi-kun's blind! And poor Sasu and Naru-chan... I cant wait to see more.
Did I say this looked promising? Its progressing greatly!

i must say this is good i lik it

after the first day i thought things would have been smooth. but the elders are a real pain. sasu really has it tough though, pretending to be a bastard must really be hard work lmao.

At first I was thinking this was a song fic since I just so happen to be listening to Mr. Brightside by the Killers when I saw it. But I liked the first installment and Im looking forward to the next and seeing Sasu-chan's bastardly-ness come out to play. ^^