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for The Right Choice

by FireSnake

schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it's nice that sasuke didn't act like a brat about the situation.

is sakura the mother of his children? or just a random chick?
person cynaga
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Spectacular tale and so well written - a joy to read!
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An absolutely beautiful read, my dear. You've done this pairing extremely well. Right up there with Neko Izumi and then some. I hope you've got plans for more fics cause I'm eager to read whatever else you've got stashed away now. Keep up the great work spreading the Naru love and thank you for sharing this with us.

~Devious <(^x^)>
person Mizzroja
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry Teme, but Naru-chan is taken!!! Very nice story please update soon!!!
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke's gonna be a problem, that's for sure. >:) lol

Keep up the great work!
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was so powerful! The breakup between them was too much for both of them and hope Gaara can find love again with Ikaru.:) Naruto's reaction was so, it made me feel good to know he couldnt bare to hear those words uttered to his love. Poor Shino quietly agonizing over Naruto. Im glad he has Hinata to comfort him over it. I wonder if Naruto has ever considered Shino as a potential lover?:)

schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Why glorify Assuke!? ;__; Well, he did lose half his face... too bad he got it back -_- Yes, I'm still very much a loyal Sasuke-hater.

And Shino is so sweet! He's so insecure but he finally seemed to realize that he doesnt have to be and that Naruto will always come back to him! =D I adore that! Now... if someone would just make human kind a favor and erase that last Uchiha, both of them actually, then this world would be such a better place! XD

Thank you for sharing and I look forward to the next update!
person Mizzroja
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO!! BRAVO!!!! I love this story!!! Father vs Son hmmm that will be a nice fight!!! Very Nice and thanks for Naru & Shino fix!!
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! No! They finally get together and then this happens. I was thinking Sasuke would maybe try to pull something but not Madara. Poor Naru. Shino is gonna be pissed as hell when he finds out about both Naru leaving and god help the messenger when he finds out about the kidnapping. Wonder if that messenger is going to be Sasuke. I'm so glad I checked the site this morning. Eagerly awaiting your next update.

~Devious
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i was wondering about shino's talent and the effects it would have on naru's plan. i hope he catches on soon. or will it be that sasu saves him and returns to the village with him?
cliffs get me really excited ^_^ i can't wait for more.

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