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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just a tip in regards to writing the lemon. You left Naruto in the bikini.
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June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good job on the lemon (It was sweet) Keep up the good work. I like where this story is going. You can do so much more and I am looking forward to it. ;) *Don't let Naru-chans butt feel to good be sure to break it in properly*
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June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cute! I really like this story. And I hope that my review goes to help Naruto's bottom feel better.:) Can't wait to read more.
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June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You should make Sasu suffer just a little more! I'm so loving how poor Naru has to cross dress! LOL!
Update soon!!
Update soon!!
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May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
muwahaha! >:] i love a little, sexy Naru and a hot, pervy Sasu! i think you should torture him and then give him whatever he wants...rinse and repeat. lol great story! i can't wait for more! ;)
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Why wouldn't you enjoy your own story? In theory, you should be writing something you want to read anyway.
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
BAHAHAHAHAHA.
Naruto's so dense, but that's why we love him right? And you've captured Sasuke's bastardness perfectly. :D
Naruto's so dense, but that's why we love him right? And you've captured Sasuke's bastardness perfectly. :D
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Give the poor man what he wants. I mean who are we to deny Sasuke, I mean he is a Uchiha for God sake! lol! I like this story a lot and can't wait to read more. I really like that you are dressing Naruto in such interesting outfits.
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May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
one word: hot. loved how you paid attention to detail and really used them to make the story more intimate than a smutty scene. i am looking forward to seeing the dynamics of naruto's relations with sasuke. let the hotness ensue!