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for Innocence From Ashes

by klstenning

person silverfox
schedule August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OK.

First of all, I'd like to apologize and say that I haven't actually read "The Slave of Sound" yet. I read the first 5 chapters, didn't like it (not enough detailed smut), and moved on. Now, three days later, I came back to read the ending chapters of "TSoS". And of course, I simply HAD to come here to read the sequel. And to my pleasure, not only has your writing style improved drastically, but you added exquisite sex scenes as well. Go you!

I absolutely loved every minute of "Innocence From Ashes" and I am definitely going to read it over again; then I'm going to see if you've written any one-shots yet. ;D

I love the fluff, the changes in both Naruto and Sasuke, and Kyubbi's new role in life. I loved the action, the tears and the laughter, I was crying and laughing right along with everyone else. I surprised myself several times with my outright talking to the characters and how wrapped up I became in this story. I felt every emotion, and you wrote each scene beautifully. I'm really glad I gave your story a second chance.

Keep writing! XD
person smint45
schedule February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow this story was fantastic!!!! And totally fluffy!!!! I'm so happy they get their happy end after all the angst from the prequal!!!! Thank you so much for posting it!!!
person Aku
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful. Absolutely stunning. There are no other words that do this story and it's predecessor justice. *bows* You are a true artist of words. I was in such a rush to continue reading the story that I forgot to leave a review for the first story, an error that I will now go correct.
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
read both stories in sucsession, great story, a little twisted, but all and all i great read
schedule May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AH MAN!!! I cried for this one too!!! I love this little universe so much. I dont even know what to say other than it was beautifully amazingly awesome and I totally want more! I cant wait to see the one-shots and more-shots that you'll post in the future. Thanks again for sharing.
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hooray you're putting all your stories here, I don't know if you discovered this yet or not but the easiest was to post here is just do copy & paste. I've got to say for some reason this one is one of my absolute favorites. Maybe it's just the sweetness of the childhood & love from the beginning with no one or nothing coming between Sasuke & Naruto that steals my heart everytime I read it. I look forward to the reset of your work being here & maybe some new posts as well.

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