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Amazing. I commenting on your part one over at FF.NET under HugAZombie. I hope you post more over there soon - easier to keep track :)

I noticed it's been a while since you updated, and wanted to remind you of this fic in case you forgot. And to let you know that I can't wait for the next update ^_^

Can't wait to see the next chapter

I saw this fic on the 'newly up-dated' home page and by-passed it because I am not familiar with sci-fi and the space police bit sound kinda quirky. But then I stumbled across your 'This thing we don't call love' fic and loved it. It was sweet and endearing, but not dull. It was believable and very well written. I really enjoyed it, so thank you for taking the time to share and up-load your work. It made me smile and I greatly appreciate it!

Having read that, I recognized that you were the same author of this sci-fi fic. You sparked my interest and now I just had to read about some space officers. You're brilliant. I really like your style, characterizations, and the over all story. I'm sorry I was so harsh to judge initially.

The time skips fit and mesh perfectly. Your diction is spot on. The dialog is well balanced and paced. I also love Sasuke's mini-asides you have in italics. You really are creating a universe of your own, but you don't lose me as a reader while you introduce us to this new realm. The story is fantastical, but contained and suspends disbelief. I hope your real life is good, and when you have time are able to continue with this piece. : ]

woot! So far I'm loving your fic (are you surrree its your first?? ^_^) I do have to point out one little thing though (I'm not sure if its been said yet), in the first chapter you had Sasuke call Kakasah a "masochist" when I think you meant to write "sadist". A masochist is someone who enjoys pain (misery or the like) being inflicted on them self while a Sadist is one who enjoys causing others pain (misery or the like). Going off of context I think Sasuke was referring to how Kakashi seems to enjoy tormenting him?..hence Kakashi is a sadist. hope that helps ^_^ and keep on writing i can't wait till ur next upadate ^_^

This is so great!! I love it and I agree with you there should be more stories like this!! I love you moody, slightly uncertain sasuke, your wonderful naruto and I can't wait for more! Please more and I was wondering if you could email me the next time you post a chapter because I do not want to miss anything of this wonderful story. allidoislie@msn.com

please no robot sex, the worst sex ever!!!!! DON'T DO IT PLEASE DON'T DO IT!!!!!!!!

You've updated! I'm glad. I really love the cyper punk genre, and love Naruto in it. I'm just not so good a writing it!

Fantastic Chapter.

kool story, but i want to ask wat are hires? b-c i keep on thinking that they r androids of such even though naruto is sorta human

This is an extremely interesting and refreshingly new plot. I'd love to know more about the world you've created and I love the characters and their interactions. Naruto's great in this and I love the Neji/Sasuke rival thing.

Keep up the great work!