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Love the story!! Keep it up. ^.^

lol don't tell me kashi kidnapped ruka lol

more please! it's a good read!

this is so cute! i love the way you wrote it, a fairy tale with a lovely twist. iruka's character is well mapped, one who possesses great kindness but who is not easily swept off his feet. he is not the damsel-in-distress type. kudos! kakashi was so adorable. his simple-mindedness coupled with that feisty personality and unwavering determination gives new definition to multi-layered character. the last lines had me sitting at the edge of my seat. it creates tension and anticipation so early in the story. i really hope to read more of this soon. thanks! :)

What do I think about this story? Well, this is very orginal and sooooo cute that I can't wait to read more. You know the personalities of the characters are perfect and I just have a feeling that this will be a great fairy tale. Thank you for a great first chater!

Fun start! Hope to see more soon, I wanna find out what happens! XD