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I decided to do one review for Chapters 16 and 17 since I wanted to see Sakura and Gaara's reactions after the big lemon. Loved the lemon by the way, although Sakura did hurt Gaara by calling Naruto's name during. Anyway, I'm actually starting to like Izanami now. I liked her interaction with Naruto and Hiro. She seems like a pretty good mother. I wonder what Shikamaru and Tsunade WERE talking about before Sakura albeit inadvertantly confessed that she had sex with Gaara. I wish the real Naruto wasn't dead but I can deal with it for this story. Moving on to chapter 18.

Chapter 15: Oh, Sakura x Gaara action, eh? Very nice. I wouldn't have thought of pairing them up. Moving on to chapter 16 and the lemon.

Chapter 14: So Kakashi and Yugao have infiltrated Suna and are working undercover. I don't know why I didn't figure that out earlier. Oh, man, Gaara can't hold his liquor. Yep, as Neji said, it's going to be an interesting party to say the least. Moving on to chapter 15.

Chapter 13: Apologies for the small hiatus. I had to read this chapter in intervals because of my suddenly hectic schedule these last few days. Anyway, so Sasuke has two twin daughters now. He's a surprisingly good father considering his wives are at each other's throats constantly. I really don't like either of them. But I'm biased. In my book, Sasuke either is with Sakura, Naruto, and sometimes: Itachi, Kakashi, or Gaara. See? I'm biased. Anyway, thank goodness someone is taking care of Kankuro and trying to help him escape. Moving on to Chapter 14 now.

Chapter 12: I loved the last line. I'm ashamed (not really) to admit that I would have liked to have caught a peek at Neji and Gaara's "show", too. I'm so bad.

Thanks for your review (for "Broken Mirror"). It's cool. I'm just glad you've been keeping up with "Broken Mirror". And I'm glad you're enjoying my other story, "Tobi".

Anyway, now I'm moving on to chapter 13.

Chapter 11: So Tsunade (the little girl) is Naruto and Sakura's child. That's awesome. Sasuke's wives, though...*rolls eyes*. He's going to have a cat-fight on his hands one of these days. I am so relieved that Kankuro is alive. I wonder who the guy with the Sharingan is. Moving on to chapter 12.

Chapter 9: Gaara definitely sank in this chapter. But what can you expect from someone who grew up in a desert? Moving on to chapter 10.

Chapter 10: Oh, no! What is Gaara going to do when he hears that people think he and Neji were doing more than just swimming in the bath? I bet the ANBU in the tree was Sai again but then I could be wrong. Moving on to chapter 11.

Chapter 6: Man, Neji not only are you out of line but you are a total jerk to boot. He wouldn't have said that, I'm sure, if Gaara still had the Shukaku inside of him. Those words would have been Neji's last if that was the case. And the ending...what a shocker. I am quickly moving on to the next chapter.

Chapter 7: Man, Gaara REALLY beat the crap out of Neji. I mean, he had a broken arm with the bone sticking out and everything and he was still delivering the punches. All I can say is: Wow! Yeah, better stop those "let's research Jinchuriki" medics before you have two new Orochimarus in the village. Not good. Moving on to chapter 8.