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August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Lord! That had to be the hottest Shino/Hinata story... and it isn't even at the nitty gritty yet. That being said... HOW COULD YOU END IT THERE? Please tell me you're going to update this soon because I just found it today and dear Lord, I'm snared!
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July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh you must continue! It was nicely written and I agree that Kiba's character was portrayed well, but so were Shino and Hinata. Hinata is still a little timid yet strong and you really went inside Shino's head. Waiting for the third chapter :D
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June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An update! I hoped you'd continue. Thanks so much!
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! How could you end it with that line!!!!! Please update soon!!! Will Kiba join the action or naruto???
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June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Sadly stories of this team are rare. I love your Kiba, and your dialog was great. I look forward to finding out what happens. :)
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March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gah! So, what happens!? What happens?! I wana know! Good job keeping everyone in character, my main pet peeve is people not keeping them at least semi-in-character, which you do and you use proper grammar! Yay! Keep this up!
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March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is rather interesting, very different and I liked how each of them had their own time to muse over the years in their own ways. I enjoyed the first chapter, it was very enlightening and I cannot wait for you to post the next chapter so please be quick and do so!! I am interested in this story greatly!!
Check ya later...
Death18
Check ya later...
Death18
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March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well done. Love the perspectives. Can't wait for the update!
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sure, i love it. please continue. ^^
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Do continue! I really like Shino's characterization here, it feels very OC and his infatuation with Hinata is very interesting. Also, Kiba's spot on. Thank your for writing this and I hope you continue the story