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ARGH, I totally had a lot more written out than that. What I was saying WAS: The plot is unique and amazing and I love the way Naruto is like 'I'm fat D:'. It's so cute. I'm really happy that you update a lot, too!

This story is like so fucking hot, god I am so turned on. I love how Iruka is all stern like a father would be with his daughter. I also love how Naruto's characteristics show so boldly in this fic. Well there is a bunch more details I wish to congrats you on but I have simular vision isses and my eyes are really stained so my vision is starting to fade. I read too much tonight. Thank you and cannot wait for more, a whole hell of a lot more.

I love this story. I hope you update soon

i like it so far it's interesting..please continue