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by Raholea

schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O_O

Whoa . . .

You, my dear, are a pervert.

And the world is better for your presence.
person YojiKato
schedule November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap that was hot!! Yay for both gettin' nailed. Heheh. I do have to be honest, I kinda skim the het parts and focus on the yuri and yaoi. Very good chapter and I look forward to the next. ^_^
person Djargo
schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Great story. I wasn't sure about the pairings, at first, but your writing took care of those doubts. This is one hot story.^_^ I hope you put out another chapter because I'd loved to read about the morning after. Can you imagine some of the things going through their heads!?
person Anon
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOOOhhhhh I love when Naruto is aggressive like that
person Feion Phylar
schedule October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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Dear Yaoi God,
My dearest Fluffy needs to be inducted into the smutty-angel ranks. She has gained her wings with this fic. I tasteful blend of het, yuri and yaoi. I applaude thee. I loved it; our plot baby is now a grown ass sexy man. Brillant job, wifey.
schedule October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*=O_O=*

Goddamn!! That was the hottest goddamn thing EVER!! You even slipped some feral Naruto action in there for me. Its like some sort of dirty version of christmas!! =^^= hehehe

Keep up the awesome work! *nosebleed
person Leeana69
schedule October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:snickers:

Good chapter, exactly the right amount of smut between everyone. Though Naruto and Sasuke's portion reminded me of a Harlequin romance with the somewhat cheesy dialogue. :D

Though I can say nothing, at least you're updating you're work on a regular basis. ^-^;;

:hangs head in shame:

There, story read and reviewed, now I'm off to go watch Leverage and smoosh men together in compromising positions and watch them wiggle and try to get away. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA. >:D
person Kay
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You still have the talent for writing that I remember. I'm not a fan of the particular style you have but you do it oh so well. I'm sincerely interested to see more. Nice job.
person Aini
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, Beth. I have to say that I'm really not used to reading Het. ^_^; Sad, isn't it? Anyway, it was enjoyable and I have to admit that the first part was my favorite. If only you had gone into more detail with the kiss! XD j/k
person YojiKato
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't like readin' het, but I saw the yaoi warnin' and thought I'd give it a chance. I hope to see some male on male smut soon. ^_^ Either way, very well written, so, keep up the good work. ^_^

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