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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It really squicks me to see Iruka try to be dominate to Kakashi! I know it's intergral to the story and all, but it's just so wrong. Kakashi belongs to Pein and I hate to see Iruka take what should be his to command. I see Kakashi's target has entered the picture now. I guess it won't be long before all hell breaks loose! It would be wonderful to be able to go back in time to Ame and just revel in the happiness Kakashi found there, but I know this has to go forward, and I really want to see how this plays out. Thanks for all your hard work! I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next. Later! - Beth
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmmm kashi has a tough road ahead of him. i can't wait for more.
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April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man-oh-man.
I am /THIS/ close to being grounded. If I do get grounded, and this website is blocked, then I'll just go around the block.
Unfortunately, 'going around the block' does not include allowing me to send postdata pages (like reviews, comments, posts, click to a new page, ect)
So if for some reason you've posted a new chapter and I have NOT reviewed, then simply assume I have been grounded until the end of time... or at least for another month and a half... again.
>_> how do I land myself in this much trouble?!
I am /THIS/ close to being grounded. If I do get grounded, and this website is blocked, then I'll just go around the block.
Unfortunately, 'going around the block' does not include allowing me to send postdata pages (like reviews, comments, posts, click to a new page, ect)
So if for some reason you've posted a new chapter and I have NOT reviewed, then simply assume I have been grounded until the end of time... or at least for another month and a half... again.
>_> how do I land myself in this much trouble?!
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April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, actually, online, I normally pretend I'm a guy... so I go by all kinds of names. Covu, Viper, Yukimaru, Sora, Ren, etc etc etc. =O it's just that I get called "Yuki" as a nickname... (its not my real name. =_= but someday I WILL be a manga artist!)
And I guess it is just girls who read YAOI... I have yet to meet a guy (anywhere) who reads it.
Not that I try very hard. Or at all, it seems.
And, jeez, I almost got grounded from AFF.net. >_> I'm already grounded from FF.net. Right now, I'm on such a tight line... You how some people think tying a dog to the wall and placing a bone just out of reach will teach the dog not to go at it? Thats stupid. because blocking sites I like going to (fanfiction, for starters) is just going to make me try to break the chain even more.
Blegh.
SO! Onto the review...
I thought the pancake thing was funny, but also meaningful. Kakashi seems to keep going in and out of it, doesn't he? Things Iruka does collides with memories... (I honestly feel "Kisame" and "Pancakes" are the funniest possible combination of words possible. Ever.) And I though the mention of Kakashi being all but banned from kitchen appliances excluding the refridgerator was hilarious. Absolutely hilarious- I was laughing.
And the way you wrote Gai out- normally, it's when people try to write about Gai that I tend to balk, because they either write him as hyperactive, oblivious, stupid, and/or very badly. Mentioning Gai, even for a moment, is what usually seems to ruin most stories people write.
Instead, you did it as near-perfectly as is humanly possible! No useless ranting about "THE POWER OF YOUTH!" or randomly screaming, when it is obviously NOT the best thing to do: "MY DEAR ETERNAL RIVAL! I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU HAVE FOUND TRUE LOVE AT LAST!" And then bring up some dumb "Find love in a week!" challenge. Trust me, it's so stupid that I often end up stopping because it's just /that/ repelling and repulsive. =D I bet even Kishimoto would be proud. (lol)
And the last sentence- the lightning bit- is a bit ironic, since Kakashi uses Raikiri/Chidori/Lightning Blade. But that was a good ending to the chapter, because I now have a really good idea of whats going on in his mind without you having to explicitly write everything at that one moment. Of course, we can now obviously deduce that he's feeling incredibly guilty, somewhat hypocritic, and probably a little confused as well as alone (I'm guessing he misses Pein even more, being stuck with Iruka now.)
Poor Iruka. I still can't wait to see how the rest of this plays out.
=D
And I guess it is just girls who read YAOI... I have yet to meet a guy (anywhere) who reads it.
Not that I try very hard. Or at all, it seems.
And, jeez, I almost got grounded from AFF.net. >_> I'm already grounded from FF.net. Right now, I'm on such a tight line... You how some people think tying a dog to the wall and placing a bone just out of reach will teach the dog not to go at it? Thats stupid. because blocking sites I like going to (fanfiction, for starters) is just going to make me try to break the chain even more.
Blegh.
SO! Onto the review...
I thought the pancake thing was funny, but also meaningful. Kakashi seems to keep going in and out of it, doesn't he? Things Iruka does collides with memories... (I honestly feel "Kisame" and "Pancakes" are the funniest possible combination of words possible. Ever.) And I though the mention of Kakashi being all but banned from kitchen appliances excluding the refridgerator was hilarious. Absolutely hilarious- I was laughing.
And the way you wrote Gai out- normally, it's when people try to write about Gai that I tend to balk, because they either write him as hyperactive, oblivious, stupid, and/or very badly. Mentioning Gai, even for a moment, is what usually seems to ruin most stories people write.
Instead, you did it as near-perfectly as is humanly possible! No useless ranting about "THE POWER OF YOUTH!" or randomly screaming, when it is obviously NOT the best thing to do: "MY DEAR ETERNAL RIVAL! I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU HAVE FOUND TRUE LOVE AT LAST!" And then bring up some dumb "Find love in a week!" challenge. Trust me, it's so stupid that I often end up stopping because it's just /that/ repelling and repulsive. =D I bet even Kishimoto would be proud. (lol)
And the last sentence- the lightning bit- is a bit ironic, since Kakashi uses Raikiri/Chidori/Lightning Blade. But that was a good ending to the chapter, because I now have a really good idea of whats going on in his mind without you having to explicitly write everything at that one moment. Of course, we can now obviously deduce that he's feeling incredibly guilty, somewhat hypocritic, and probably a little confused as well as alone (I'm guessing he misses Pein even more, being stuck with Iruka now.)
Poor Iruka. I still can't wait to see how the rest of this plays out.
=D
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April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And welcome Yuki, congrats on the account:)
Pein's versital, he bottomed for Kisame in one of the earlier chapters;)
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Thank you. =D I might post stories of my own... once I finish writing my book, anyways, but at the rate it's going, that won't happen 'till... um... hm... (does math in head) I've been writing it for a year and a half and it's 53 chapters and over 450 pages... and I'm 1/3 of the way done with it. =_= At least I have an "editor" (a friend.)
And True, true. -nod nod- Pein DID bottom then...
But it's just still hard to IMAGINE. Sometimes you need words to do that for you. =O
But I really cannot imagine him bottoming for Kakashi, or Kakashi insiting on Topping, whichever would/could/theoretically come first.
Pein's versital, he bottomed for Kisame in one of the earlier chapters;)
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Thank you. =D I might post stories of my own... once I finish writing my book, anyways, but at the rate it's going, that won't happen 'till... um... hm... (does math in head) I've been writing it for a year and a half and it's 53 chapters and over 450 pages... and I'm 1/3 of the way done with it. =_= At least I have an "editor" (a friend.)
And True, true. -nod nod- Pein DID bottom then...
But it's just still hard to IMAGINE. Sometimes you need words to do that for you. =O
But I really cannot imagine him bottoming for Kakashi, or Kakashi insiting on Topping, whichever would/could/theoretically come first.
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April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My my, but Kakashi is the actor.
"said arm was still attached" hehe, I love Guy.
have to admit, tad upset with Kakashi (understand completely why he's doing this and torn)
still...but this will bring soooo much conflict for his emotions. good, looking forward to it:)
thank you.
And welcome Yuki, congrats on the account:)
Pein's versital, he bottomed for Kisame in one of the earlier chapters;)
"said arm was still attached" hehe, I love Guy.
have to admit, tad upset with Kakashi (understand completely why he's doing this and torn)
still...but this will bring soooo much conflict for his emotions. good, looking forward to it:)
thank you.
And welcome Yuki, congrats on the account:)
Pein's versital, he bottomed for Kisame in one of the earlier chapters;)
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April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'll have to check out that "honey & cheese" pancake thing. It sounds more like a crepe recipe! Haha, I just got home, and had to read this update. I was very excited when you told me about it. I feel really bad for Kakashi. He's so much happier in Ame, but you never cheat your readers by making the characters lives easy. They all have to go through their personal hells. Although many characters in this fic will be torn apart, I just pity Kakashi the most because he's the only one that doesn't have the good fortune to believe everything is black and white. Pein is firmly grounded in his ideas as are the citizens of Konoha, just as Kakashi once was. But that's all over for him now and you captured it perfectly in the way you had him wishing he was struck down by lightening. Thanks for all your hard work on this fic, and take care, and stop falling down and hurting yourself! XD Love ya, Beth
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I was surprised at another helping of Pein/Kakashi goodness! Have I told you how much I love this fic lately. It is turning out to be your best one yet! I'm so thrilled to be a part of this. Haha, I had to wait till Monday to read this little gem, because I'm still having internet problems at home. I was extrememly upset that our little conversation got cut off Friday! I look forward to talking to you soon. Thanks for the wonderful update! I look foward to more of your brilliant mind! Take care darlin! Beth
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
of course, Lividangel, Kakashi makes the perfect uke. =O how can I imagine him otherwise? I mean, when I'm not reading Kakairu and finding him on top every time... ^_^
But yeah, I can really imagine Kakashi wanting to relinquish (Relinquish. I love that word. Re-lin-quish. Ahahah.) the sort of responsibility that comes with being himself. Copy-nin, Sharingan Kakashi, Hatake Kakashi the man who copied over a 1000 jutsus and blah blah blah... I mean, even he needs to sit back and relax. Let someone else be in charge for once.
Ironically, this time it doesn't look like he has a choice (I doubt Pein wants to bottom, does he? I can't imagine him as anything but Seme. =/)
But yeah, I can really imagine Kakashi wanting to relinquish (Relinquish. I love that word. Re-lin-quish. Ahahah.) the sort of responsibility that comes with being himself. Copy-nin, Sharingan Kakashi, Hatake Kakashi the man who copied over a 1000 jutsus and blah blah blah... I mean, even he needs to sit back and relax. Let someone else be in charge for once.
Ironically, this time it doesn't look like he has a choice (I doubt Pein wants to bottom, does he? I can't imagine him as anything but Seme. =/)
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahahah! I finally got a AFF account! (I couldn't figure out how to, at first. =/) Now I can review ANY story I come accross! WOOT WOOT! -does the happy riceball victory dance-
Now if I can only convince myself to start writing those fantasies in my head and to remember the password/username combo. ^^
And now I don't have to keep on typing my name and email (and have it hidden) whenever I give you a review! (it does become a pain in the neck after awhile.)
Now if I can only convince myself to start writing those fantasies in my head and to remember the password/username combo. ^^
And now I don't have to keep on typing my name and email (and have it hidden) whenever I give you a review! (it does become a pain in the neck after awhile.)