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July 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM
this is great!
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July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
not a bad story, i see a lot of potential in it, I hope that you come back to this story and work on the problem the three of them face, maybe bring in a little bit of action (violence)in there as well.
at the moment it really just sounds like a soap opera mixed with a sitcom or something, there needs to be more going on, some kind of extended conflict to keep my interest.
overall its a good idea and could become a good story i think.
at the moment it really just sounds like a soap opera mixed with a sitcom or something, there needs to be more going on, some kind of extended conflict to keep my interest.
overall its a good idea and could become a good story i think.
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
a great chapter please keep up the great work.
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June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Preety Guuud
keep it up ;)
keep it up ;)
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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story! hope to see more soon. but what happened to swingers?
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February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Any real ideas on who you're putting in the harem? I'd kinda like to see Tenten or maybe Isaribi (filler girl who could change into a fish creature, if you didn't know). But, anyway, I sense trouble for the Namikaze family.
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February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok then its porn without plot. sorry you dont like, but i just dont see narusaku happening anyway
oh and i do read the manga, while it's true that hinata admires him, she is crushing on him
oh and i do read the manga, while it's true that hinata admires him, she is crushing on him
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh come one, why the hell did you get rid of his feelings for Sakura like that? I hate stories that totally disregard that just because they don't like the character. He should have been married Sakura before Ino at least.