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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is very good. my only advice would be to watch your pov... point of view.. I'm sure you know that... anyway it switches a bit in the midst of the scene and it's a bit confusing. But I love the idea of this and while I almost NEVER ok, NEVER read het (ok so maybe I've read some hinata/neji) I'm really enjoying this. Keep up the good work. Thanks! Slave