rate_review Reviews

This is really interesting! Do you think you might get back to it someday? :)

I am absolutely in love with this story. The spacing is great, an idea I have contemplated but have been to chicken to try. But it works out well for your story. I hope to read more soon, nothing this original has been on here in a really long time.

i still cant figure out what he is and the conversation at the beginning confuses me but i guess everything will be explained in due time ne.narutos got alotta enemies but he doesnt seem like that bad a person.cant wait to see what happens next :)

i think this is a really interesting story. i am really curious as to who made sasuke and naruto and if it has something to do with finally being able to see the sky. since i think that they are the one ones that d and d was talking about what does naruto have in him that sasuke is going to want (i mean besides the sexing). sorry i can't remember their names. i also find your concept of the future as really fascinating. i can't wait to see the next chapter.

*gasp flail falls* This concept... this PLOT ... the whole thing... I've never read anything like it! I love it! Do continue or I will cry... I'm not begging for an update. But it's always my luck that the best stories get abandoned. Please dont abandon! **huggles**

ooooh! *shudders* I cant wait for more. the way you write just paints the picture's for me. Its Fantastic!!!
Much love!

This is definitely an interesting story, kind of reminds me of a sci-fi flick.

I think Dali is Orochimaru and Dagim is Itachi but then again I am not certain.
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And it looks like Naruto isn't human either and somehow knew Sasuke from his past but they don't remember each other. Based on the conversation between Dagim and Dali I wonder if this whole thing is setup.... Anyway just throwing ideas out there, can't wait to see what happens next!