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for I Want You Bad

by DetoxAngel

person RiddleWraith
schedule December 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is freaking awesome! I absolutely love it!
schedule November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gaaaah I loved it so much!!! The way you combinea little bitchiness and rough lemon and...you know how to write them! You're just this awesome! XD

Especially I liked the phrase “I’ve had underwear rougher than you!”
I laughed my ass off on that one :D
person Walnuts for friends
schedule January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the best sex scenes I've ever read on the internet. And I've been reading fanfiction for seven years now. Congratulations^^ That was deliciously perverted. And extremely hot. Your writing style matched your sex scenes perfectly, powerful and breathless. Good job!
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOLY MONKEY BLOCKS I HAVE TO FIX MY PANTS NOW THANKS ALOT!!! AND I MEAN IT WRITE ANOTHER I CANT STAND IT I LOVES ALL YOU WRITING
!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU WERE SENT FROM THE GODS IM SO F'IN HAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I GIVE YOU A ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
person jake
schedule October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
holy fucking shit-balls that was fuckin awsome!!! 10 points for amazing use of kakanaru pairing! great work!!!:)
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is the best hot sex i have read, man that was awsome my face was getting red just thinking of this . it rocked hope to read more like this ...
person industrialmidnight
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good freaking Lord that was HOT! I loved it! You wouldn't have a sequel lurking anywhere, would you...? I loved the descriptions and the suspicions that Naruto had in the beginning, and a dominant Kakashi is a ridiculously sexy one! I loved everything. Good story!
person GellyBelly
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Damn! That was so fucking hot!
Sorry for the bad word.
person GellyBelly
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YOU SHOULD MAKE A SEQUEL! PLEASE!!
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is definitely in my top hottest list XD Seriously, I didn't even notice what was happening around me, I was just too absorbed with the story. And it made me super happy to see the angst at some parts ;D Very good combo~ Sorry I can't leave a long review, it's just not in me XD thanks for writing this!

Great humour towards the end XD

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