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March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well wow that was so very descriptive. i worked in a slaughter house for a couple of months and that first chapter made me remember some of the more gritty parts of my old job. as for the dissection of the person you did a good job. - the connection between kiba and hana are so rooted and so tightly bound i think it would be next to impossible to find a closer pair of people saying that i am so very worried about narutos well being in the next chapter seeing as kiba looks poised to at lest maim him. but damn i am so very looking forward to the next chapter.
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January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Despite how...disturbing that whole butchering scene was, I could NOT take my eyes off of it! I was SO into it and thinking, my God, that's pretty thourough! Anyway, I'm looking forward to an update and everything! Great job!!!!!