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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!!!! FINALLY!!! SANKYUUU!!!
Wow... I so absolutely love the cake POV lmaoooo I remember you showing me that AGES ago... still funneh!!!!!!! Poor cake though >.> Getting a fist slammed into it... sad way to go...
Random Kakashi... what's with the sudden msg? The foreshadowing with his whisper after Naruto left......... nyaaaaaa you must write morrrrrrrrre so we can actually GET to themm!!!!
The OC's were cute... I can't wait to see what they have to do later with the plot.
Sakura and Naru's interaction was very canon (you're always so good with that :P) I wanna know more about their probationnnnn!! You're being very secretive on it... I mean, obviously, they went hunting for Sasuke... but what happened that they got their shinobi title taken from them????
And both of Naruto's captains are lined up with the firing squad?? O.o Hopefully they are there to help!!! And you ended itttttttt whyyyyyy???? lol I hope you do a bit more work on this, there is SO much left!!!
I love it so far! Thank you for writing this for my bday ^___^ You rock, Tomotannnnnn!!!!
*love and hugs*
Nic
Wow... I so absolutely love the cake POV lmaoooo I remember you showing me that AGES ago... still funneh!!!!!!! Poor cake though >.> Getting a fist slammed into it... sad way to go...
Random Kakashi... what's with the sudden msg? The foreshadowing with his whisper after Naruto left......... nyaaaaaa you must write morrrrrrrrre so we can actually GET to themm!!!!
The OC's were cute... I can't wait to see what they have to do later with the plot.
Sakura and Naru's interaction was very canon (you're always so good with that :P) I wanna know more about their probationnnnn!! You're being very secretive on it... I mean, obviously, they went hunting for Sasuke... but what happened that they got their shinobi title taken from them????
And both of Naruto's captains are lined up with the firing squad?? O.o Hopefully they are there to help!!! And you ended itttttttt whyyyyyy???? lol I hope you do a bit more work on this, there is SO much left!!!
I love it so far! Thank you for writing this for my bday ^___^ You rock, Tomotannnnnn!!!!
*love and hugs*
Nic
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It really pulls you in. I can't wait to see what happens next. What caused Sakura and Naruto to lose their positions? Gods, please update soon!
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm, interesting! i'll be curious to see how this plays out. ;-p
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
uwaaa!!! that was goooood!!! =]