rate_review Reviews

u had quite a few typos. srry. it was good but also a bit rushed maybe u shuld get a editor 2 edit wht u typoed on

Oh my. I love these kinds of stories where the beginning starts off from canon manga settings. I loved it!

foremost, I thank you deeply dear! I love you!
I love your writing, this one-shot was steamy and erotic and I love the details and to have visualised them.

Often I had hoped for such scenes based on the manga chapters and I'm elated to have you bring them to life and to read them!
I'll be re-reading this many times!

Thank you so much
[laena]

“I don't want to be killed as a virgin.” That line was great XD